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You hear the sound of someone running towards you, and look up to see Oshen approaching you, panting. As a Tineye- one of the few Allomancers you were able to recruit for the army- he is your best scout. He salutes, then at your word, deliver his report.
"The Lord Ruler's convoy has been sighted- about an hour down the canal. One thousand soldiers march in the convoy, along with several dozen Obligators and a few hundred Skaa slaves. Also," he swallows nervously, "Inquisitors, my Lords."